Really great writing here, Abhi. Love the blend between awesome chemistry lessons and future-vision discussions. Great story telling. I know it's good writing when it's easy to navigate. You make it seem effortless.
My favorite lines:
"What actually happens when we ingest a drug? Say, aspirin. As you may expect, it begins chattering with the other biomolecules in our body."
Chattering is such a great word and provides the perfect mental image of what's happening.
‘What is that?’, you may ask. I’m not quite sure, but all you really need to understand is three things: "
I love that you don't explain this. In an LLM-reflex world it's easy to give us an additional 100 words about what this is. It's almost harder not to define it, to realize that it's not important to the story, and to remind the audience that there are bigger ideas at play. Great job bridling the author's knee-jerk response to explain everything.
Really great writing here, Abhi. Love the blend between awesome chemistry lessons and future-vision discussions. Great story telling. I know it's good writing when it's easy to navigate. You make it seem effortless.
My favorite lines:
"What actually happens when we ingest a drug? Say, aspirin. As you may expect, it begins chattering with the other biomolecules in our body."
Chattering is such a great word and provides the perfect mental image of what's happening.
‘What is that?’, you may ask. I’m not quite sure, but all you really need to understand is three things: "
I love that you don't explain this. In an LLM-reflex world it's easy to give us an additional 100 words about what this is. It's almost harder not to define it, to realize that it's not important to the story, and to remind the audience that there are bigger ideas at play. Great job bridling the author's knee-jerk response to explain everything.
Thank you for the kind words!